Monday, April 20, 2009

Plan for Essay

Plan for Essay
Topic: Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding.
Introduction:
I introduce you that I am an explorer now and I’ve already had a experience for a specially exploration. The thesis statement is tell you “To be an explorer is a good choice, I just started my own voyage, fortunately I met precious deposits, then they have a good meal on us! Finally we find an area is an equatorial rain forest, but not ordinary! Unfortunately, gauss what?” the three topics are “I met precious deposits”” they have a good meal on us”” find an area is an equatorial rain forest, but not ordinary!”
Racing Action:
I explained that we want to have a exploration for the Egypt, something like Pyramid and the culture for this mystical place. We found a plenty of precious deposits.For the precious deposits we must have a fight, so the world war 3 were started at there. We have a contract for the precious deposits. We were exactly got the lower price, so terrible and horrible!
Climax:
We started to give it up and tried to find other precious deposits, area!There is more and more shallow from the deep to the surface of the ocean. We used the string to got on the land then we went into the forest. There were no animals, besides the insects, so we saved, but except strange plants, they can move by themselves and the we were easily to get lost, the sun shine is not yellow, it’s a little bit dark green, very dazzling.The plants at there were very strange, and finally we were running out there because of some strange person!
Falling Action:
At the other island, we met some strange person.They were almost wearing nothing, just some fur on their bodies, they have no shoes on, no hair, we even can’t resolution whether man or woman. The most interested point was they have a strange looking, they have three eyes, no hair, very tall and strong, children were taller then the normal person in our world!
Conclusion:
I hope you have your own experiences for exploration, and enjoy in it, even if it is going to be dangerous and have difficult situations.